2013年5月30日 星期四

Likeit, or doubt it?2.3






Like it, or Doubt it?
Like-accumulate posters spread overall Facebook

 Like-accumulating pictures are photos that show “if this post receives over 50,000 likes, I will do something.”  However, shall we be SO positive to have a clear announcement to do good deeds, like delivering curry rice for free?

  One of the publishers on Facebook is mother of a seven-year-old girl. The girl brawls her parents to buy a bike for her; the negotiation of the parents is: if the photo get 50,000 likes, they would buy her a bike.
  
  They got over 70,000 likes over a night and the girl obtained a bike as wished. “We would still buy the bike even if the post didn’t get 50,000 likes,” the responder said,” I had helped others' like-accumulation too: it’s a proposal post and I think it was boring. “

  A student from NCU thought the current of these like-accumulate articles is kind of sensationalism. “It is like a breast-baring accident of second-rate entertainer,” he added.

  Whether the statement is true or too exaggerated, their words reflect the perspective of the crowd. Though people help the publishers they don’t know, they had doubt or keep a reserved attitude to them. We have to improve our living quality via actions, not just post a declaration on Facebook. After all, actions speak louder than words


  How do you think about like-accumulating posts?








Critics from group members
1.     Claire: Like-accumulate is not a right word, it shall be changed to “like-accumulating.”
2.     Tina: too much “I” in the news. Claire further explained that it will be better to show subject truth instead of what I’M thinking about.
3.     C: can add a question in the end of the article if I want people to think about the problem
4.     Ruby: it’s not necessary to say ”I want to know the motivation and whether they fulfill the declarations.” Because I will write the motivation later.
5.     Claire: Add spaces to give the news a good and comfortable arrangement.
6.     Ruby: the sentence of “I feel annoyed…….” shall be changed
7.     Ruby: at the bottom of picture, you should add a introduction of picture, such as “figure one”

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